Tag Archives: Five Sentence Fiction
Five Sentence Fiction: Feast
Five Sentence Fiction: Business
Five Sentence Fiction: Character
Triple Visual Dare #1: Five Sentence Fiction: Candidate
Anonymous Legacy’s Triple Visual Dare #1
Lillie McFerrin’s Five Sentence Fiction – Candidate
When Alice tumbled through the rabbit hole and chased the white rabbit through the forest, she knew she was onto a winner. Time was no constraint, but as the path narrowed the bunny skidded left and Alice almost lost him. She veered after him and reeled at the top of the spiral staircase, teetering on the top step.
Alice paused, smoothed her long, blond hair and adjusted her black ribbon; it was a long way to the bottom…
The rabbit’s cottontail bounced from step to step and she couldn’t resist, she was a prime candidate set for a new wonderland…
(100 Words)
(3 Visual Dare Photographs)
(5 Sentences)
Written for Anonymous Legacy’s Triple Visual Dare #1 including all three images, but not managing to link with my current NaNoWriMo project! However, maybe there are bonus points for keeping it to five sentences for Lillie McFerrin’s Five Sentence Fiction?
Five Sentence Fiction: Potions
The bottle lay, unharmed, beside her on the pavement, its thick glass mocking her, and emerald viscous liquid seeping from its mouth mixing its heady perfume with the sickly sweet fragrance of her own blood.
Its promises spun crystalline webs in her mind even now as she lay, unmoving, on the concrete.
Nothing but snowy white noise filtered through the smog in her brain and she smiled as people began hurrying towards her.
She was still queen of the world, dark faery of the night, raven of midnight black…and her wings still flew in diaphanous shapes as she ignored her ebony hair stuck to her face in sanguine strands.
She couldn’t see her companions’ horrified eyes, or hear their distressed voices as they stared from the scaffolding in disbelief; she couldn’t see her shattered and broken body on the pavement and she was yet to realise that no potion in the world would fix this mess.
Five Sentence Fiction: Flawed
Five Sentence Fiction: Detour
City lights twinkled like jewels on her tiara, just as her eyes did as she stared at the sights, and the car sped on through the streets.
Weeks and days, and hundreds of miles and finally all her Cinderella dreams were to come true…she clasped her hands tightly in her lap, embracing her mobile phone and his treasured text messages.
But London’s streets became crowded and the lights lost their lustre as time was swallowed within the city’s black hole.
Later and later, her fingers ached from small-screen typing and her message tone echoed her frustration, and finally he called; his image, as suave as she’d remembered, pixelated and jumped but his grin leaped out and her heart danced as he promised to wait.
Her smile widened as he blew a kiss goodbye and his hand flicked across the screen, but the call was not done and though he thought he was free, her smile slipped as the accusatory screen, discarded on the bar, showed his arm squeezing a buxom blonde’s waist and the kiss he planted on her cheek was drowned by Cinderella’s tear.























