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Forbidden Love – Call of the Dark

This is my entry into the Forbidden Love Blog Hop hosted by LillieRuth and Janelle
These are my star-crossed lovers…

Call of the Dark

She waited as he closed the door, his passion glinting in his eyes. She leaned against the wall, her heart pounding wildly and her soul yearning like she’d never before known.  Her ivory veil rippled in the breeze seeking entry through the open window and he was at her side tenderly cupping her face. Her eyelids fluttered and his breath caught as she bit her lip, not long and everything would be as it should…
Orange blossom and lonely birdsong wafted from below the balcony, sweet fragrance and refrain intoxicating the tower room, and she could barely wait. Leaves rustled from vines clothing the stone walls, and slender tendrils curled over the balustrade as she led him out into the balmy night.
Her tresses, pale as the midnight moon, cascaded and his fingers entwined as his lips finally touched hers.
Trembling she held him close but he pulled away. “You’re so beautiful…” he whispered. His breath rasped as he moved towards her and she caught him within her arms. This time his kiss was full and urgent, and she returned it with mad fervour and she drew him close.
As he buried himself within her embrace she threw back her head and let out a cry. He sprang away in astonishment as she vanished in a flurry of feathers.
“I needed your kiss,” birdsong echoed, “but only in marriage…”
And before his eyes she was gone. She fluttered her ivory wings and sang out, and the answering call came from the forest below. He stared in disbelief as his bride launched away from the balcony and out into the indigo sky…and she danced through the deepening night as her beau, the blackest of all ravens, met her and her enchantment was gone, vanquished beneath the glistening moonlight.
(297 Words)


Be Inspired

I’ve been tagged by the wonderful Rowanwolf (check out her novel answers on her blog) in a new Blog Hop, which originated on Vicki Orians blog. The idea is to share our inspiration and hopefully inspire others! A great opportunity for us writer people to blog about our writing inspiration!

1. Answer the ten questions
2. Tag five other writers, link to them in your post so we can hop over and see their answers too.

The Questions:

1. What is the name of your book:
My current work in progress will be a fair time in edits…so I’m choosing to write about my last finished work called ‘Beneath the Rainbow’.

2. Where did the idea for your book come from?
I was walking past the children’s swings in our local park, thinking how much I loved the swings when I was a little girl and the first line came to me: ‘Freya was seven years old when she got hit by the car, it was a 4×4 with a bull bar.’ I couldn’t shake the line and a heartbreaking premise was born…

3. In what genre would you classify your book?
When I wrote it I had no thought of genre, age range or how to pitch it…only after it was finished did these questions come about. That caused problems…I would class it as an older children’s book, but many adults have enjoyed it too. The main protagonist is seven as mentioned in the first sentence and you can’t get away from that! I discovered that publishers would want a main character as close to the age of the children reading it…so seven was young and would older children relate? You’ll have to read it to decide what range it fits!

4. If you had to pick actors to play your characters in a movie rendition, who would you choose?  
This is the hardest question…most of my characters (in all my writing) are gleaned from a mixture of my imagination and from characteristics attributed to my eclectic children, relatives and aquaintences. I find it hard to relate them to actors…though I will risk sounding really pretentious and admit my dream actor for frail Old Thomas would be Sir Ian McKellan. Freya would be an unknown, but have the presence of a young Dakota Fanning.
My own inspiration for Freya was my daughter who was just over seven when I wrote the book:

5. Give us a one sentence synopsis of your book:
‘In death, Freya knows she needs to move on, but is caught within her mother’s grief and the discovery of terminally ill Old Thomas…on earth her family discover a list of her wishes and determine to fulfil both hers and Thomas’s dreams.’

6. Is your book already published/represented?
I decided to self-publish and the book is available on Kindle at Amazon. I love this book, but I know my writing grows stronger and with advice have decided this is my practise book…with the issues surrounding genre and age range, I decided to leave it as it is and concentrate on other writing for more traditional publishing.

7. How long did it take to write your book?
I began in March 2009 and finished the first draft in October 2009, I then suffered a serious bout of depression and shelved the book, going back to it in 2011. About a year all in all.

8. What other books within your genre would you compare it to? Or, readers of which books would enjoy yours? 
If you like emotional, lyrical stories and don’t mind weeping a bit…you should like this!

9. Which authors inspired you to write this book?
That’s easy…I read ‘Loser’ by Jerry Spinelli and adored it, and I love beautiful stories with a lot of heart and emotion. Aside from this book, I am inspired by the fantasy writing of JRR Tolkien, CS Lewis and Garth Nix…

10. Tell us anything that might pique our interest in your book.

My blurb reads:

“It’s those silly dreams that keep us alive.”
Dreams define us, shape us and realise our potential…they make us who we are.
Freya won’t let death stand in her way.
When she dies Freya knows she needs to move on, but is caught within her mother’s grief and the discovery of a terminally ill old man. Finding she can affect the lives of those beyond her heaven she fights to reach her mother and wants to help old Thomas realise his final dream.
Meanwhile, her family finds her own list of goals and soon discovers that Old Thomas has a burning desire to ride a motorbike.
Freya intends to create a rainbow, the last item on her list, to reach her mother, but her pale arcs won’t achieve closure. She perseveres for scarlet like remembrance poppies then searches for sunset orange and sunflower yellow.  She recreates green like her willow and blue like daddy’s t-shirt.  Finally conjuring indigo, the shade of deepening night and lastly violet to match Purple Ted…
Beneath these colours will Freya reach her mother, wait for Old Thomas and be ready to move on?
 
Discover the importance of dreams and fulfilment in Freya’s heart-breaking and uplifting tale of grief, hope, triumph and joy.

These are my tags: (I know there are only supposed to be five, but I couldn’t help myself, so six it is…)
Jo-Anne @jtvancouver
Angela @Angela_Goff
Daniel @surlymuse
Angela @ang_writes
McKenzie @Love_Kenzie_
Cameron @CameronLawton

Kreativ Blogger Award…

Oooh, just been tagged in the ‘Kreativ Blogger Award…by Donna B. McNicol (check out her blog…) so here goes…

The Rules:
1. Thank & link back to the person who nominated you.
2. Answer the ten questions.
3. Share ten random facts/thoughts about yourself.
4. Nominate seven worthy blogs for the Kreative Blogger Award.

The Questions:
1. What’s your favorite song?
Can’t decide between two: 
I love ‘Iris’ by the Goo Goo Dolls and ‘Run’ by Snow Patrol.


2. What’s your favorite dessert?
Right now that has to be trifle, though I am partial to profiteroles…who isn’t?


3. What ticks you off?
Hypocrites make me angry…those who don’t do as they preach. If you have beliefs, stand up for them!


4. What do you do when you’re upset?
I disappear into myself…I write, and write and write…it’s cathartic…


5. Which is your favorite pet?
I always thought of myself as a cat person, until I got a dog! My German Shepherd, Roxy is my heart and soul, those huge golden brown eyes just make me melt, even when she’s naughty!


6. Which do you prefer: black or white?
If it’s dark or light you’re after, it’s dark, I’m a night-time girl (not a party girl, but a staring at stars night-time girl!). Colourwise, I prefer neutrals, greens and browns…


7. What is your biggest fear?
To lose myself…My memories are so hugely a part of me that to lose that part of my mind would be my biggest fear. (I’m watching someone close to me do just that and it’s painful…)


8. What is your attitude mostly?
I worry…but I try to be positive. I suffer clinical depression so have learned over the years that my attitude is paramount to combating my condition!


9. What is perfection?
Perfection is losing myself (wasn’t that my biggest fear just now?), to lose myself in something I love, whether it be writing, reading, chocolate…or some other pleasure!


10. What is your guilty pleasure?
My guilty pleasure…chocolate, every day.

The Random Facts:

1. If I could be an animal, realistically I’d be a cat, sleep, eat and play, but imaginatively I’d be a unicorn: wild and free…

2. When I met Vince, another girl asked him to dance and I put my hand on his knee, I would have growled at her if I wasn’t such a nice girl! Lucky for him he refused her…

3. I’m impatient…no really!

4. I’d love to go to Iceland, the country that is, the shop does nothing for me!

5. I was painfully shy as a child, I’m still not comfortable with people I don’t know, but now have a confidence I never used to have.

6. I don’t fit in…and sometimes I want to…

7. I had a nervous breakdown at eighteen, and another at thirty-one…but came back from them…I still struggle not to hurt myself….

8. I wrote off my first car two days after I bought it, a week after passing my test, I drive better now! I love driving and love riding our motorbike even more! I passed my bike test in my mid-thirties.

9. I hate hurting people, I once, needlessly, gave up a dream in order not to hurt someone else. Don’t give up your dreams for anyone.

10. I would rather die than go back to the insecurities of being a teenager, but often I’d love to go back and relive the intensities of those emotions!

The Nominations:
No idea if these bloggers already have this award or not…but I’ll leave participation up to them!

http://www.angwrites.com/  @ang_writes
http://theothersideofsorrow.blogspot.co.uk/  @Love_Kenzie_
http://www.bullishink.com/  @bullishink
http://lilliemcferrin.blogspot.co.uk/  @LillieMcFerrin
http://cameron-writes.blogspot.co.uk/  @cameronlawton
http://www.raveninthewritingdesk.co.uk/  @falcon_feathers
http://bekahcat.blogspot.co.uk/  @bekahcat

Lucky Seven Tag…

I feel privileged! I’ve been tagged in Lucky 7. Here’s how it works… 

     1.  Go to page 7 or 77 in your current manuscript.

     2.  Go to line 7.
     3.  Copy down the next seven lines/sentences as they are – no cheating.
     4.  Tag seven other authors.

My current WIP in is several states of editing, and I’ve used a couple of excerpts lately in Five Sentence Fiction, so I grabbed the last manuscript I’ve written from my book ‘Beneath the Rainbow’, this is Page 7 on my Word document…though, obviously you’ll get a different paragraph from the Kindle version! 

‘Her friends sat by their parents, not all had come, some parents thought services like this were too much for ones so young to bear, but Freya smiled at those who had come. Her friends sat there, stiff and quiet, in awe of the occasion. One or two of the boys had let their minds wander and one was studying a spider crawling up the side of the pulpit.
Her best friend, Meg, stared at the coffin, and swung her legs to and fro. Meg liked the flowers and nodded to herself in approval at the bluebells. She leaned close to her mother and whispered. “Is she in there?”
Meg’s mother glanced down mortified at her daughter’s question, but relieved that it had been whispered, a child not so well brought up might have said it out loud…that was too much to consider.’

So now to tag…you may have been tagged before (sorry), but I like your writing…so if you haven’t already…we’d love to see your work! 


Gratitude Project…

We’ve all heard of: ‘Counting Your Blessings’, but did you know that literally counting your blessings increases your emotional health and well being?

‘Researchers had a group of students write for twenty minutes each day about things they were grateful for, a second about things they were angry about, and a third about random topics like the color of their shoes. Guess which group was happiest at the end of the experiment? The ones who wrote about things they were grateful for. Even more interesting is that those who wrote about the things they were grateful for were less likely to be sick throughout the semester.’
(Chad M. Burton and Laura King, ‘The health benefits of writing about intensely positive experiences.’ Journal of Research in Personality 38, no 2 (2004): 150-63)


I continued reading the article that quoted this experiment and found a challenge:

Write a list of 100 things you are thankful for

100 things seems a lot, I’m sure I could find one hundred things…but it might take a while, and little thinking! The article helped by offering a solution…write ten lists of ten things for different categories…this looked so much easier!

  • Write 10 living people you are grateful for.
  • Write 10 people who have died you are grateful for.
  • Write 10 physical attributes you are grateful for.
  • Write 10 material possessions you are grateful for.
  • Write 10 things about nature you are grateful for. 
  • Write 10 things about today you are grateful for.
  • Write 10 places on earth you are grateful for.
  • Write 10 modern-day inventions you are grateful for.
  • Write 10 foods you are grateful for.
  • Write 10 things about your faith you are grateful for.
So…my plan…is to write my list of one hundred, but in the categories listed…Call it a New Year Resolution (I don’t make many of those) if you like…but I hope that while compiling my list of gratefulness I will find that I’ve barely scratched the surface of all the things that I’m thankful for…
Care to join me?