A great story, nice and spare with the words so there's no excess verbiage. I love the way you've presented it too, I was toying with that idea too, but the fading of the text really adds to it, especially with the way the story went
A great story. The fading out of your words with the city in the background – a clever idea and adds a touch more to you already atmospheric words.One of my favourites.
Beautiful card design and the use of the font color fading in and out of the background was nearly as "insidious" as the tale itself. 🙂 My mind was running trying to figure out how this world got the way it did and what else lived in its depths. Great work, Lisa.
He he JM, you caught the spelling mistake! That's something I'm going to have to make sure I fix before I flatten the image next time, but I'm glad you liked the tale and the formatting! 🙂
The Last Krystallos 
Oooo… Now this is a good one. I like it. Nice and dark. Like the image itself. (:
Nice, also thought the way you used the font was brilliant, really gave us a proper creepy feeling x
I love it! So much said in so few words. And I really like the way you made the color of the words slowly fade. It goes perfectly with the story.
I loved the formatting on yours too Christina… it's fun to play around with it!
I liked the fading out idea, just like the poor citizens…oblivious!
Yup, going for sinister and disturbing with this one!
Excellent Lisa, both in content and presentation.
Thank you Sandra!
A great story, nice and spare with the words so there's no excess verbiage. I love the way you've presented it too, I was toying with that idea too, but the fading of the text really adds to it, especially with the way the story went
Loved it totally! 😀
Thanks Sania!
It's fun to play with the format, thanks for commenting
A great story. The fading out of your words with the city in the background – a clever idea and adds a touch more to you already atmospheric words.One of my favourites.
Thank you MJ, I liked this idea!
Beautiful card design and the use of the font color fading in and out of the background was nearly as "insidious" as the tale itself. 🙂 My mind was running trying to figure out how this world got the way it did and what else lived in its depths. Great work, Lisa.
He he JM, you caught the spelling mistake! That's something I'm going to have to make sure I fix before I flatten the image next time, but I'm glad you liked the tale and the formatting! 🙂